Boring.
While I don't agree with your message (I'm an atheist), I can safely say that your submission is more of a book than a cartoon. I'm sure you were probably going for this, but it doesn't really make great viewing material. It would be better to just have something published or argue on a debate forum.
On the plus side, the graphics made the flash look clear and concise. The simple but cool graphics were the only highlight of the flash.